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[E.T. Excursion - episode 02.2]

Pretty good, dude. Pretty interesting style with some good animation. However there are issues. Your use of skews are really distracting! They look so out of place from your art style and you constantly use it throughout the cartoon. I feel it should use them in a more subtle manner. I also recommend that if you're gonna use a "gray" for your character's teeth, I'd add a tint of blue or orange so it doesn't look bland or as if they're teeth look like silver. Aside from all that, I'm intrigued in this series and what direction the story will go.

vezanmatics responds:

Thanks! :D

I'll keep the skewing thing to a minimum in the future, I never thought it was obvious and probably use it as a crutch for when there's not enough movement.
Also the characters' teeth in medieval times are value #CBC5B3 because they've never been cleaned and are kinda grody.

[Cartoon series in the works]

Looks promising. Though one critique is to fix his/her left arm because it looks fairly shorter than his/her other arm. I'll try to see any later updates to this cartoon you're making.

StudioMnesia responds:

Thank you! Thanks for the critique btw! Although I am making this cartoon "for fun" for YouTube to be honest. I lack self-esteem so I really don't expect this project to attract major companies to hire me. I definitely appreciate even with that error of mine, you find my work promising! :D

[If Bill Cipher Was An Overwatch Hero]

It was pretty alright. I do recommend fixing your poses and your line work. The poses look really stiff and the line art is way too thick. However, i do enjoy the creativity you did by having Bill Cipher interact with the Overwatch characters. Overall, it's a pretty fun cartoon that has visual flaws that can be improved in the later future. :)

Deltaplanet responds:

Thanks, thick outlines and the animation type is my style btw and I'll be sticking to it.

[Nani At David's - SP]

Not bad! Maybe get a better software to edit your speed paints though like Premiere or Shotcut

JThunderDraws responds:

Well, I'm no longer a fan of Adobe, since they made it a service, like month to month, but I've never heard of Shotcut! It looks...well complicated, but I'll give it a try.

Part of my problem stems from my inability to record at the highest possible quality. If I am to turn this machine from an all in one to a video editing and drawing machine, I need some better hardware (mostly better faster ram and maybe a better video card and an SSD).

But thanks for the comment!

[Peridot Pac-Man and a Slice of Bread]

I really enjoyed this in a weird way. i really like how it's going for that Aqua Teen Hunger Force style, heck you even use music from it. I'm looking foward to Episode 2

Kelsland responds:

Thx man i really miss aqua teen hunger force

[INJUSTICE 2 Parody: Super Hero Pranksters]

Lots of animation errors on this. Also that "triggered" meme!! NEVER BEEN DONE BEFORE WOAH!!! The humor just came off as obnoxious and try-hard for me, but it's the animation that really bothered me. There was way too many errors that i wondered if you even checked twice to spot any mistakes. I do hope that you can improve in your future cartoons because I haven't seen much improvement from your last cartoons. Just the same, cheap style. :/

TOONZIES responds:

Thx bro for being a professional asshole and thx for your paragraph on how shit i am!! Bitch ass fuck ass n***a :D

[Killin' Time]

Hella rad! I loved the style and all the creativity put into this! Very well done :)

ThatJemmaGirl responds:

Thank you so much :D

[Oney Plays Animated: Video Game Talk]

This was pretty mediocre to be honest. The characters were really off model and not the good kind of off model. There was no focus on the animation. Everything moved all over the place and the lines needed to be more cleaner. Better luck next time!

Eniladep responds:

Thanks, I'll try harder next time.

[Dancing 3D Elephant Man (New Version)]

What in the world? That's terrifying lmao

KarltoonLD responds:

Thank you, kindly.

[Classic Cartooners Pilot]

brought to you by zombie-wolf!!!! Oh wait it's AFTER-CREDITS now.
I already gave a review to this pilot. It's really bad. The animation is unappealing and needs a lot of work. I don't get why you need to re-upload this. It's completely gratuitous.

AfterCredits responds:

We re-uploaded so it would be under this new author now. Also, I kinda agree with your points on the animation, and we'll work harder in the next episode, thanks for the feedback.