alicemargiela's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Cute Bears and Cereal]

I didn't find this funny at all. The voice acting was kind of unbearable to say the least. Try drawing more backgrounds next time and coloring it. I liked the rough line art style on this so good job on that.

gilfgavin responds:

If you would like to give critique, do it in a way that will better the artist and not just make them feel like shit. Lighten up a little bit man come on! i cant get too mad though, i use to do the same thing a few years ago hahaha

[GROUNDBOUND]

Who throws away a good burger like that???

MegatonSlater responds:

you know there are some sick people out there

[(SPANISH) SIUUUU: UNA AVENTURA DE SONIC Y MEGAMAN]

Mal animacion y mal humor.

SAIDDIMENSION responds:

TODA LA RAZON

[Fighter Z Ain't No Show]

At 0:22 the teeth don't move with its mouth/head which looked really bad. Your drawing styles expressive but your colors are really eye irritating. Tone down the saturation on your color palettes next time. Some of the animations don't even have frame by frame and mostly relied on skews and tweens that looked off. Humor was not to my taste and was just two guys screaming at a game lol Only part I chuckled was the part with the realistic teeth. Overall, this wasn't that good and I think you can do better.

Rovertarthead responds:

0:22 I actually did that on purpose cause I thought it would look funnier that way. And yes Iv'e noticed that most people are not using black outlines anymore or at least have all kinds of colors for there cartoons but I will be having lighting and shading in my next ones for sure just didn't realize it was that big of a deal but it is here on ng so i'll be doing that. Yeah I guess I was working on the tweens too much as well my bad about that. Iv'e just seen so many people before use tweens to rely on was well but i'll mostly stick to traditional at first. Thank you for your helpful review. I'll be having lighting and colors.

[Phone Wreckers]

The animation on this wasn't bad at all. Bit rusty here and there but it's good, but the way you're trying to prove your message was kinda lame, forced, and just all out kind of dumb. Your characters are also unlikeable like are they supposed to be the heroes? Hell yeah our heroes steal and vandalize other people's items yay!!! Also, I agree with Wheel, the audio was off. You have potential, Anton, just wish you didn't waste it on silly propaganda that feel like a group of elementary teachers wrote.

Ant0on responds:

Learn what propaganda is dude. And its up to you to decide whos the hero here, but seeing as youre only 16 I guess you still dont have multiple perspectives covered in school.

[Throwverwatch 2]

Fuckin sell out! Detention!

Blordow responds:

SORRY SIR

[Go Poppy, Go!]

The animations cute but it kinda goes too off model. Don't understand how this got Daily 4th.

PascalSchmidlin responds:

Because of my excellent use of Tags, of course! I mean... How can you NOT give me a Daily 4th with Tags like "wacky" AND "silly"??

But maybe you'd just enjoy something that's a bit longer like Wacky Jack:
https://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/700349

[Bugged Out]

I really enjoyed this. You did a good job on the character animation and the story was cute and charming. I loved the part where the boy falls from the couch and hits the table and his popcorn falls. It made me laugh more than it was suppose to. I also thought the part where the boy falls on his couch in the beginning was really smooth and fluid. Now as there are good things about this, there are some small issues or things you could fix in the future. The part where the vase was about to fall on the boy (but spoilers falls on the spider), the skew when the vase gets tipped is kinda unneeded and looked awkward and out of place. At 1:34, the background gradient was kinda too saturated and kinda generic. I also thought some of the timing was slow and often parts felt quiet and awkward. They could've used some subtle background music but that may just be me being nitpicky. Overall, this cartoon was pretty good and enjoyable with minor flaws. I know this cartoon is a year old but I'm hoping you can post more of your cartoons on this website. I would highly recommend it.

Thunder28X responds:

I'm really glad you enjoyed it dude! Thanks for the critique too! I'll keep it all in mind for my future stuff. :)

[Internet]

Weird. I loved it!

FlowDownStream responds:

Thank you!

[Kirby's Tilt 'n' Tumble]

Try not to use a very stale grey and white gradient next time since it doesn't look good most of the time. There was a lot of limited animation, tweens, skews, or short cuts used in this. Not much frame by frame is used. The short was kind of cute, but your animation/art needs a lot more work and polish.

Axelstation responds:

Appreciate the honesty, I'll keep trying to improve!