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[El Chapulín Colorado Anime Op]

I fondly remember "El Chapulin Colorado". It used to be own the DVD's of the seasons along with El Chavo. Lovely memories. So props on you for making me smile a bit by making an anime opening parody of it.
Now, the main issues in your cartoon is that there are many anatomy issues such as the beginning when the Chapulin was holding his hammer. You should use references of fists from the back view or just use references for that matter. Referencing from life or just using google to search for a reference image can help you immensely. Also the intro lasted for 20 seconds with nothing but the logo there. I understand that's kinda how the intro is but you could've added a filter or maybe a slideshow of the Chapulin Colorado doing what the announcer was saying or putting English subtitles. Also, don't steal art next time. I know that Ugandan Knuckles art in the background in 1:00 is by Shgurr. You should draw it by yourself next time or ask permission to use their art. Also there's points in the animation where he shrinks in size and it looks really awkward.
In conclusion, don't steal or trace art from others, use reference images to help you out, and be careful with the character scaling. I can see your style developing in the future so just keep practicing and you'll be aight.

SFDrill responds:

I can see your point, thanks for your feedback, it´s really helpful to have someone to point out my mistakes or the things i´m doing wrong and i really apreciate this.
I learned my lesson.

[A Sad moment]

Beautifully artistic

hreyas responds:

Thank you very much

[Kirby Reanimated Collab Entry]

Very Studio Trigger like, I love this.

Dreaminerryday responds:

that is exactly what i was going for, I rewatched all of Kill la Kill recently and I really wanted to animate like those small campy/limited animation moments Trigger likes to do a lot !

[QualityTimeWithTom&Edd.mp4]

Pretty smooth animation at some parts but there's times where it just looks poor, like at 0:12, that skew looked out of place and didn't blend in. Appreciate where your heart was when making this though.

RomWatt responds:

It's still too hard for me to do blending animations. I'm also trying to replicate Edd Gould's animating style.

[A Merry Lockmas collab entry (uncut)]

The hell happened there? Did the Lock thing explode along with the tree? Did the tree explode with the lock thing? Did they both explode??? 0_o

[GARFIELD AND JON OPPOSITES ATTTRACT]

I'm gay man whose mom sucks dick at chess.

AmbitiousPoultry responds:

Correct.

[AN1MAT0R5 - Out Of Space]

This was barely an animation. All this was was a simply drawn kid tweening around the screen to music playing in the background. Also, don't use copyrighted music next time.

[Nap Time]

This was really cool, dude. Me like!

jumpclumps responds:

Thanks pal!

[ayylmao]

Was this supposed to be funny?

NappySocks responds:

no. it is a serious documentary on complex alien life forms

[Oney Plays Animated - Meg Griffin]

Hey, not bad, man. Your animations a lot more better than i saw before. Some critiques I have for you though is to clean up your line work, cut those unnecessary 28 seconds at the end, and please, try to not use highly saturated colors or basic flash colors. Read about color theory. Oh, and try to tween/skew less.

Snackers responds:

i always appreciate your reviews dude, i'm definitely gonna learn more on colour theory, and as for the unnecessary 28 seconds at the end, that was for the youtube version, I seem to have uploaded the wrong file here. whoops!