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[E.T. Excursion - episode 02.2]

Pretty good, dude. Pretty interesting style with some good animation. However there are issues. Your use of skews are really distracting! They look so out of place from your art style and you constantly use it throughout the cartoon. I feel it should use them in a more subtle manner. I also recommend that if you're gonna use a "gray" for your character's teeth, I'd add a tint of blue or orange so it doesn't look bland or as if they're teeth look like silver. Aside from all that, I'm intrigued in this series and what direction the story will go.

vezanmatics responds:

Thanks! :D

I'll keep the skewing thing to a minimum in the future, I never thought it was obvious and probably use it as a crutch for when there's not enough movement.
Also the characters' teeth in medieval times are value #CBC5B3 because they've never been cleaned and are kinda grody.

[Cartoon series in the works]

Looks promising. Though one critique is to fix his/her left arm because it looks fairly shorter than his/her other arm. I'll try to see any later updates to this cartoon you're making.

StudioMnesia responds:

Thank you! Thanks for the critique btw! Although I am making this cartoon "for fun" for YouTube to be honest. I lack self-esteem so I really don't expect this project to attract major companies to hire me. I definitely appreciate even with that error of mine, you find my work promising! :D

[Stoplight Calamity]

Epic

[(SleepyCast Animated) - Snake-charming]

Very cute style and the animation is really smooth! Excellent work

[The Spongebob Squarepants Anime - OP 1]

This rIght here is amazing. The animation was really good looking. I'll make sure to see your future content.

[A Manic Announcement]

DUUUUDE this is awesome! The animation was really smooth! The art could have been better in the line art animation. Nice work!!!

[Unleashed: The Going Gets Ruff]

This is really well done. The style and lip sync was on point. However, i feel there should have been more animation on some parts. Like the montage part felt really weird and choppy. But you can say i dig this series.

[Doctors Being Doctors - Animated Shorts]

The animation was really unappealing. The line work was really gross sloppy and uneasy for the eyes. The voice was really annoying as well and felt like forced humor. Also try not using repetitive songs for credits. Try finding another catchy song, but that's minor.

[A Hearty Breakfast! (2015)]

Really well done! It has a nice TwistedGrim vibe!

[retorvo5]

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