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You should try drawing the inbetween frames yourself instead of skews.

Bitch you thirsty please grab a sprite

I love the smooth and fluid animation on this a lot! The style was cool and all but it would've looked much better if you added fingers on your characters and not just ovals. Overall, very neat looking but the voice acting could've been a little better.

RemiRecklessCartoons responds:

I'm glad you liked the animation! Yeah, decided to skip the hands mostly for time reasons but I'll try to make them better in future projects. I'll keep what you said in mind, thank you for commenting!

You could say this whole cartoon was "eye candy"

Pretty neat, dude. Smooth animation, but I would wish for you to stop adding yourself as a random character in almost every cartoon. (Ex. Your Game Grumps animations.) But I guess that's just a nitpick. Keep at it.

I don't know what I just watched. Was the guy stroking his stache evil? What was the story? Joke? The composition was pretty iffy, too. Some things were too zoomed in. Also what did the mustache person even say? I could barely hear him. Your art/animation also needs improvement, too. Try doing short animation tests in your own time instead of posting random unfinished looking animations.

WillMcMuffin responds:

Thank you for your review, to answer your question , the mustache guy said that in exactly 5 minutes the other guy will die. Technically, this was kinda a test but i needed to post it to have reviews and understand what i should improve.
Next time i'll spend more time on the story and the comprehension instead of animating something that i just vaguely thought about.

PS: you're lucky, you haven't seen the animation i did BEFORE this one...

Copyrighted music.

JacksonS7R responds:

EVEN THE CHARACTERS ARE ALSO COPYRIGHTED

Well, there goes that funny meme.

xNinja202 responds:

Why so rude

This was really enjoyable! Very nice animation and the way you mixed 3D and 2D elements was superb. I've watched this about three times now. Can't wait for episode 3, my dude! Rock on!

can't do better, huh?

Deltaplanet responds:

Why did you waste your time writing a review so long that I'm not even going to read it?

You don't have to like it but you also don't have to post hate on all of my videos because you can't do better.

I feel like Pablo when I'm working on cartoons

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