alicemargiela's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Phone Wreckers]

The animation on this wasn't bad at all. Bit rusty here and there but it's good, but the way you're trying to prove your message was kinda lame, forced, and just all out kind of dumb. Your characters are also unlikeable like are they supposed to be the heroes? Hell yeah our heroes steal and vandalize other people's items yay!!! Also, I agree with Wheel, the audio was off. You have potential, Anton, just wish you didn't waste it on silly propaganda that feel like a group of elementary teachers wrote.

Ant0on responds:

Learn what propaganda is dude. And its up to you to decide whos the hero here, but seeing as youre only 16 I guess you still dont have multiple perspectives covered in school.

[untitled trip #2]

Trippy

[Waiting For The Bus]

Absolutely beautiful

[Throwverwatch 2]

Fuckin sell out! Detention!

Blordow responds:

SORRY SIR

[The Crime]

I got a laugh out of this, but why the heck is this rated A?

[Go Poppy, Go!]

The animations cute but it kinda goes too off model. Don't understand how this got Daily 4th.

PascalSchmidlin responds:

Because of my excellent use of Tags, of course! I mean... How can you NOT give me a Daily 4th with Tags like "wacky" AND "silly"??

But maybe you'd just enjoy something that's a bit longer like Wacky Jack:
https://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/700349

[Christopher Mckiernan Digital Artist & Animator]

Demo reels shouldn't be in the portal but your art's pretty fine. Try posting it on your "news" on your page.

[Waking Tortoise]

The art's great on this woah mama

[Bugged Out]

I really enjoyed this. You did a good job on the character animation and the story was cute and charming. I loved the part where the boy falls from the couch and hits the table and his popcorn falls. It made me laugh more than it was suppose to. I also thought the part where the boy falls on his couch in the beginning was really smooth and fluid. Now as there are good things about this, there are some small issues or things you could fix in the future. The part where the vase was about to fall on the boy (but spoilers falls on the spider), the skew when the vase gets tipped is kinda unneeded and looked awkward and out of place. At 1:34, the background gradient was kinda too saturated and kinda generic. I also thought some of the timing was slow and often parts felt quiet and awkward. They could've used some subtle background music but that may just be me being nitpicky. Overall, this cartoon was pretty good and enjoyable with minor flaws. I know this cartoon is a year old but I'm hoping you can post more of your cartoons on this website. I would highly recommend it.

Thunder28X responds:

I'm really glad you enjoyed it dude! Thanks for the critique too! I'll keep it all in mind for my future stuff. :)

[Totally Tubular Collab: Part 55]

There's some inconsistency issues on the animation but your art's really good. Nice work pal